Looking for honest feedback

Hey everyone, I’m working on a couple of light painting composites and would love to hear honest feedback. For the first location, I only had a few minutes before getting booted, so I’m aware angle and comp aren’t ideal for the location. The second location gave me plenty of time. I’m using a Sony A7RIII with a Sigma 24–70 f/2.8 Art, plus a Nanlite Pavotube 15x II for lighting.

I’m trying to capture that clean, polished vibe. Let me know what you think of the composition, lighting, and my overall editing. Any tips or critiques are more than welcome. Thanks in advance!